Drafting and planning

Here is another editing shot of my movie trailer. Here I am editing the scene where Castro has one of Poezzi's men and this scene will feature in the final segment of the trailer. I opted not to see Castro's face in the clip and just to see his hands and the knife as I felt that this will add suspense and tension in the final bit of my trailer. As shown by the audio track I don't have any sound to go with this segment yet but this is because I am still in the phase of editing this before the deadline of my first draft.

 I also decided to add a cut to black in my trailer as shown by the image to the left. I did this as it is a very effective technique to use and it also allows me to add a bit more time onto my trailer. As shown by the image I have added in a cut to black after Poezzi has been informed of Castro and then Castro's segment as shown in a previous blog, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2016/01/drafting-and-planning_21.html. This will make the audience curious on what the problem is as it will cut just to black before going into the segment. I will also probably add a cut to black in my final segment as well to add to the suspense and tension. At the moment I am very close to finishing my first draft and feel that so far my trailer is looking good! However I will appreciate the feedback I get back so that I know where to improve.