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Here is my first draft of my trailer which I handed in to my teacher recently. **INSERT TRAILER**


While my teacher praised me for how well I linked the action with my sound and music, and how well my actors fitted the role of gangsters and detectives, he did give me some improvements for my trailer. For starters he pointed out how it is not clear indication that Castro is Poezzi's rival as they both come across as just two separate gangs and theirs nothing that distinguishes them from each other. He suggested that I add blank fillers, as shown in the image above, to show that Castro is Poezzi's rival. This was a valid point and by adding in one of these fillers I will be able to clearly show the audience that Castro is Poezzi's new main rival, as well as stretching out my trailer a bit more time wise so it fits in as a theatrical release. It was also suggested that I use punctuation drops for my fillers. The gif below shows a punctuation drop in the Legend trailer. These are effective ways of pulling in the audience as the fillers jump out at them grabbing their attention rather than just appearing slowly and taking some of the gloss off of the trailer. My other improvements for the trailer was to sort out the sound effect at the start around as it goes from slow simple sound effects to a loud bit of dramatic music. This is a fair point and made my trailer seem a bit unprofessional so therefore I have taken it out and will begin to look for another sound effect to use instead which fits in with the slow build up at the start.