Drafting and planning

In a previous blog, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/blog-post.html, I recently discussed the improvements my teacher gave me to improve my trailer. I have taken this on board and quickly began to start making my improvements, focusing on making in fillers to help distinguish how big a challenge Castro is to Poezzi, as well as giving my target audience some insight.

 In my first image I decided to copy something most trailers use. At the end they have a quick 2 second spell where the show the title of the film then it cuts to coming soon and website, plus social media network logos where you can find more information on the film, as shown by the top image from the 'Straight Outta Compton' trailer, as well as the film production logo, in my case the BBC films one which is in the center. Therefore I copied this to create my own as it allows my audience the chance to find out more about Poezzi, and the coming soon will feature after my Poezzi picture shown on the bottom. However I need to take out the coming 2016 bit out of that image.

Below is a filler I will add before Castro appears and will build on a filler I will use earlier in the trailer. This clearly shows that Castro is more than he appears in the trailer and he is the man who will push Poezzi the furthest in the quest to be king of the underworld. Finally in my last blog I forgot to mention that my teacher thought it would be better if I scraped the ratings system after the BBC intro and added in a makers off as it is more effective and is something crime drama/gangster movies use. Therefore I just made up another film name and added in the makers off to put in at the start of my trailer so it looks more professional and realistic. I now just need to focus on the sound used in my trailer, and then will have a finished copy!