Target Audience: response to detective scene

Recently I posted a blog post on the detective scene I had shot my for my trailer, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2015/11/drafting-and-planning-detective-scene.html. I was happy with this scene but had a bit of doubt over whether or not the shot I used was correct and whether on the whole it was a good clip, but luckily my target audience commented on the post to give me some useful feedback.

As shown by this image I got a very positive feedback from my target audience. I was praised for the use of the pictures I did in which I printed off pictures of the two people playing Poezzi and Castro and stuck them on the board to make it look more realistic and was also praised for the choice of casting as it looked professional and had a 'British feel' to it which I am aiming for as it is a British crime drama, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2015/11/target-audience-and-organisation-who.html. However I was also told to do a second shot this time with medium close ups to show how serious the detectives were taking the situation and to present them better. I will do this as I was planning to re-shoot it to focus more on the gang pictures and on the lead detective. Overall though I am pleased with the positive feedback I got from my target audience and am pleased with how the clip turned out.