Drafting and planning: raw footage

This is one of the additional scenes I added in to my storyboard to make my trailer longer, and I recently filmed it when finishing the filming for my trailer. This clip will need editing however I cannot do that till 7th January as that is when I next have access to MoviePlusX6. However despite this I feel that this is a strong clip.  For starters I feel that I got the lighting correct here as there are hints at light but most of Poezzi is in darkness showing how despite him having a chance to be good he still chooses to do bad. I also opted for a close up of Poezzi to show how serious he is about Castro, and the detectives coming for him as shown by his line 'I love it when they try.' However there is a sense of smugness there to show the audience that he believes in his own ability. The way he looks as well was also planned as I got my actor to not shave off his beard. This is to contrast with the previous statement, as while he believes in his own ability he is not clean shaved, as in previous clips, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2015/11/target-audience_24.html, to show that Castro is defiantly causing him some stress and trouble. Overall I am happy with this clip and feel it will be even better when I can edit it.