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Here is my finished trailer for my film 'Poezzi.' After publishing my first draft a while ago, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/drafting-and-planning.html, I built on feedback and I am very happy with how my trailer has come out. I decided not to add narration over the money scene instead just stretching the son 'shipping up to Boston' to the full 15 seconds I was allowed. I also decided to pick a much slower sound for the start to set the tone of the film because in my first draft in went from really slow to really fast and loud too quickly. The sound I found was perfect and created a lot of tension as well as making the audience wonder what the trailer would feature. I also added in punctuation drops as mentioned before, http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2016/01/blog-post_11.html. I really think my punctuation drops fit in well and fills in the audience on what is happening in the trailer without giving to much away. Those were my two main improvements so I just brushed up on little things like sound and editing and am really pleased with how my trailer has come out as I feel it gets across the story I wanted to tell about Poezzi being untouchable but then facing his biggest challenge.