Film presentation done from LewisGlennon208
This is my film presentation which I presented in class to show where I am with my film right now. I presented this in front of my class so that I could get some responses on how to improve my trailer. On the whole the class seem vibrant with my idea pointing out that the thought the link between my ideas and the storyboard and they expressed how good it is that I have already planned out locations, songs, props, editing and cast. They also said my film trailer idea was similar to legend and lock stock and smoking barrels which is good as I have tried to base my trailer on those films as shown in these blogs. http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2015/09/target-audience-ledgend-trailer.html. However as well as this praise I also had some areas to improve. For example one person pointed out that I probably should not use two tracks, due to my limited time of copyrighted music. However another pointed how I could just record someone singing 'new dawn, new day' as that signifies whats happening to Poezzi which is a real good idea and one I will consider. Also my teacher Mr Stevens pointed out that for the gangster film I have to make sure my cast are not immature when filming. I can see why this is a concern but I believe my choosing of the cast will stop this problem. This session has helped me a lot as it has shown me what I have done well in terms of ideas and how I can still use them but then on certain one's I can tweak them and expand them to make my trailer as effective as I can.
This is my film presentation which I presented in class to show where I am with my film right now. I presented this in front of my class so that I could get some responses on how to improve my trailer. On the whole the class seem vibrant with my idea pointing out that the thought the link between my ideas and the storyboard and they expressed how good it is that I have already planned out locations, songs, props, editing and cast. They also said my film trailer idea was similar to legend and lock stock and smoking barrels which is good as I have tried to base my trailer on those films as shown in these blogs. http://lewisglennonmediaa2.blogspot.co.uk/2015/09/target-audience-ledgend-trailer.html. However as well as this praise I also had some areas to improve. For example one person pointed out that I probably should not use two tracks, due to my limited time of copyrighted music. However another pointed how I could just record someone singing 'new dawn, new day' as that signifies whats happening to Poezzi which is a real good idea and one I will consider. Also my teacher Mr Stevens pointed out that for the gangster film I have to make sure my cast are not immature when filming. I can see why this is a concern but I believe my choosing of the cast will stop this problem. This session has helped me a lot as it has shown me what I have done well in terms of ideas and how I can still use them but then on certain one's I can tweak them and expand them to make my trailer as effective as I can.
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